Prophecies REDO

Redo of this: fav.me/d90v06n

Characters are Rusty (left) and Bluestar (right). It's a scene from the beginning of Into the Wild, when Rusty loses his collar in his fight with Longtail. I guess this is when Bluestar really sees that he's the thing Spottedleaf prophesied.
Has anyone else noticed how the symbols beside Rusty spell 'fire'-'star'? XD

This was a style experiment. I need to tweak it a bit, but otherwise, I think it's really good! I like the feel of the style; should I keep doing it?

The image was taken with a cell phone instead of the scanner. Sorry about the terrible image quality.

Warriors, Rusty/Firestar, Bluestar ©Erin Hunter
Art © Brownleaf360